Brain Blast Gone. Darn it. Writing can be so darn frusterating. I am trying to get a move on chapter two...a new chapter two. The one before it doesn't make sense until later. I needed a transtion but I can't seem to get it JUST right...and being somewhat OCD I NEED it JUST RIGHT!
So Amber is the main character of my book and she's kind of...lost inside herself becasue of the death of her sister and the drama of the neighborhood she lives in. She's kind of...dead inside, I guess would be one way to describe it. (I'd give you all more, but it would give it away and I'm not that far yet...I have the idea...just not all organzied in the story yet)
At first the story was written in 3rd person but then I decided it would reach the reader on a more personal level if it were from Amber's point of view (1st person). So I changed it and you basically follow her into this...limbo between our world and the dead. If that's confusing then...you just have to read it.
I just realized that sounds really depressing...but it's really not...
Haha.
Echo
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1 comment:
you should post it. It sounds really good. I really want to read it, now.
I'm an avid reader. Can't write to save my life.
EmeraldWings
Ps I'm sure the transition IS good you are just too used to reading it. Get someone else to read it and see what they think
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